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Don'T Need a King To Win

How am i ever to win, you are a critic With just a blink of an eye,  im left watching my life pass me by Without any warning as to why You again disapprove no matter how hard i try, With a smirk u just wink your other eye, an eye for an eye, You have awoken my evil eye but why, It is you that's so sly, you only lie causing me to cry, You wonder why i whine so i drink too much wine and also bought a pie, You bviously cringed as you watched me and said all i do is binge so for that, I cut a fringe, just like a big syringe, I saw the prick u were within, So i ditched u like a fling cause i don't need a king to win

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Date: 5/6/2017 10:02:00 AM
Courage Dear Lady L. Just KNOW from years of my reading the Bible, Jesus sees each of us as beautiful. He knows our every thought, but if u are a painter/artist/song writer ... every "art" product is your masterpiece, or valuable. Jesus is that kind of God and Beloved. Pray for this man, though he is a "prick" in this poem. Gid loves him too, but u don't have to. Just pray & forgive & heal faster. I will pray for both of u OK? Anil (Neil) Deo
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Date: 4/10/2017 4:18:00 AM
is this the reason?
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Luayne Fraser
Date: 4/10/2017 11:08:00 AM
This person could never be you ***

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