Don'T Mock Her Knockers

In a limerick what does a man seek
Depends: At what does it give him to peek? --
   A flash of bare thigh
   Or knockers, Oh my! --
More than that mocks the feminine mystique
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Y. Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Lol! Gershon, You have penned a good one. Good title and comment. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 4:55 PM
I think it penned itself...
Krutsinger Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 3:16 PM
The ending rhyme makes it a true limerick! Well done.
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 4:56 PM
Okey-dokey.
Flood Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 2:49 PM
I asked a young lady to show me her knockers. She came from behind her counter and said, ‘Sir, everyone’s having doorbells nowadays.’ Fun limerick, Gershon. Terry
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 4:56 PM
I guess that young lady is not exactly the brightest bulb in the galaxy, eh?! lol.
Hankins Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Perhaps...who knows? If one sees everything she offers, he still cannot see inside her head! Thought-provoking, gw.
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Hopefully, there's something there...
Edmonds  Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 10:08 AM
What is it with men hear my cry - Why do ladies bits make them sigh - The joke is on the men - If they had any sense - They'd look at themselves and know why…… Belle (Good one Gershon!)
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 4:55 PM
You know what 'bits' rhymes with --- zits!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Im sure it does as baring exposes and removes feminine mystique i must agree. Kudos for a fab fantastic poem! ------~~~~~~^^^^^^^^------ Plz also do read and comment my newest poem .
Cheney Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:25 AM
This one has to make the top 10 greatest titles list.
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Well, well, well. Finally cracked the top ten... Thanks, Kenneth.
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