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Don'T Linger

Walk

briskly

through the dark.

For ignorance

forbids fearful feet from facing forward.

Forward into the light of acceptance

— the only true

cure for such

blinded 

eyes.

9.18.18
Double Tetractys (1-2-3-4-10-10-4-3-2-1 sylabble count)

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Date: 9/21/2018 10:40:00 AM
This is great Jesse loved the alliteration!
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Date: 9/21/2018 12:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Jesse on your win.
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Date: 9/20/2018 8:07:00 PM
Well done, Jesse. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/18/2018 9:02:00 PM
wow, you've created such an beautiful scene here with this interesting form. good write.
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