Jesse Rowe Poet Tetractys

Don'T Linger

Walk

briskly

through the dark.

For ignorance

forbids fearful feet from facing forward.

Forward into the light of acceptance

— the only true

cure for such

blinded 

eyes.

9.18.18
Double Tetractys (1-2-3-4-10-10-4-3-2-1 sylabble count)

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John Hamilton September 21, 2018 at 10:40 AM This is great Jesse loved the alliteration!

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 21, 2018 at 12:34 AM Congratulations, Jesse on your win.

Line Gauthier September 20, 2018 at 8:07 PM Well done, Jesse. Congrats on your win.

Lewis Raynes September 18, 2018 at 9:02 PM wow, you've created such an beautiful scene here with this interesting form. good write.