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Don'T Let Your Pitter Patter

I once met a Spanish high flyer
She wiggled and danced on a wire
Her pitter once pattered
Grew ninety pounds fatter
And now she sings bass in a choir.


  Feb 4 2020
  Daniel Turner

Copyright © Daniel Turner | Year Posted 2020

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May 4, 2021 at 6:51 PM

Hahaha this made me smile

May 2, 2021 at 3:35 AM

I love a good Limerick... and that’s a good and hilarious Limerick. Thanks for introducing yourself through my poems, I see rhyme is as important to you as it is to me. Terry

May 2, 2021 at 5:34 AM

Yes. It is my belief that the rhyming and rhythm of a poem are what people mostly remember. If it's easy to read. It gives it more of a sense of familiarity. Thank you from dropping by Terry.

January 16, 2021 at 5:15 PM

Lol silly man! How are you Daniel?

December 21, 2020 at 6:03 PM

Crazy good Dan’l...

March 18, 2020 at 10:40 AM

You made me lol!

March 8, 2020 at 9:29 AM

Lol! Great

February 25, 2020 at 9:00 PM

Well-penned. Enjoyed. Blessing

February 22, 2020 at 8:53 PM

I'm applauding in Virginia - excellent limerick! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

February 22, 2020 at 11:27 PM

It was easy because MY pitter pattered and I am fatter but now I'm just flattered:) Hello You. Thank you for the flowers:)

Panagiota Romios

February 18, 2020 at 6:49 AM

Congratulations..belated though it be. I adore your limerick Panagiota xx The validation code for this was HAH! Funnnneee

February 18, 2020 at 10:18 AM

Thank you, Panagiota. I am glad I made you laugh.

February 17, 2020 at 2:45 PM

Very, very cute, from the title to the very last word. Smiles, Gershon

February 17, 2020 at 4:03 PM

Thank you, Gershon:)

February 16, 2020 at 8:34 PM

lol, The fAt lady always sings, Nicely done Daniel

February 16, 2020 at 10:37 PM

LOL I love to hear fat ladies sing. Thank you Joseph.

Krish Radhakrishna

February 12, 2020 at 1:29 PM

Nice one!! Congrats!!

February 16, 2020 at 10:36 PM

Thank you Krish

Maurice Rigoler

February 12, 2020 at 9:46 AM

This happens to all of us in time, high fliers or not. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the stop by. / M

February 16, 2020 at 10:36 PM

Thank you, Maurice.

Andrea Dietrich

February 11, 2020 at 3:45 PM

this is just wonderful, Danny boy!! Congrats in the contest.

February 16, 2020 at 10:36 PM

Thank you Andrea:)

February 11, 2020 at 9:39 AM

Hi Daniel, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

February 11, 2020 at 9:51 AM

Thank you Alexis. You are very kind:)

Charles Messina

February 10, 2020 at 4:46 PM

Great limerick, Dan. Congrats on your win!

February 10, 2020 at 6:14 PM

Thank you Charles. I appreciate your kindness.

February 10, 2020 at 4:16 PM

Great limerick, Daniel.. we get older metabolism drops and the weight gain. Sorry for your loss of your brother a pain that doesn't heal. I lost my babysister at 21 , 40 years ago and I still replay the day she passed. Aneurysm in brain, laughing one minute drinking a glass of wine next half hour gone. Thank your for congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve

February 10, 2020 at 6:13 PM

Thank you Eve. My brother died of Hodgkin's lymphoma. He was my hero.

February 10, 2020 at 2:33 PM

Dan, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and clever limerick!

February 10, 2020 at 3:54 PM

Thank you Tania. I love these limerick contests because I love to laugh. Great job!

Carolyn Devonshire

February 10, 2020 at 1:36 PM

Just stopping back with congratulations!

February 10, 2020 at 1:38 PM

Thank you, Carolyn. People are going to start to talk:) lol

February 10, 2020 at 1:30 PM

Daniel, fun humor and great rhymes. Congrats ~ John

February 10, 2020 at 1:32 PM

Thank you, John. I love limericks but this being a family oriented site, one must keep them clean:)

February 10, 2020 at 12:11 PM

Fabulous humour DT so glad to see this on the winners list, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

February 10, 2020 at 1:31 PM

Thank you Jan. You're a sweetheart:)

February 10, 2020 at 11:21 AM

I'm back with CONGRATS, Danny! Janice

February 10, 2020 at 1:44 PM

Says a lot about the type of person you are Janice. That is very thoughtful and kind and I appreciate your support. Did you guys get any winter at all over there? None here!

Janis Medders Tobechi

February 10, 2020 at 10:05 AM

Great one Daniel. Congratulations on your premiere placement.

February 10, 2020 at 1:42 PM

Thank you so much, Janice. Nice to see you again:)

February 9, 2020 at 8:54 PM

Lol! Daniel, This is hilarious! Good imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

February 9, 2020 at 9:11 PM

Thank you Alexis. Wonderful to see you again. Hoping you are well:)

Pandita Sietesantos

February 7, 2020 at 7:50 PM

Hahahahah - so enjoyable! An awesome Limerick - too hilarious! Just what I needed tonight! Hugs. Pandita

February 7, 2020 at 8:29 PM

Hello pretty Pandita. Thank you. I am glad I made you laugh. How have you been? Long time no see!

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