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Don'T Let Them Cast Ceilings!

A piece of me, forged from molten memories..
  of patchwork stability
Changes of scenery....haggard, humble backdrops
  Questionable casts of characters...
Scripts written in off-color obscenity and derangement
 
 An old soul removed from a separate caste resided
   within the constructs of this dramatization
Beyond the tangible crystallization...was an awareness
  ...an inexplicable aptitude removed from this environment
Manifesting without much notice,  slipping back through the cracks.
    Potential never surfacing as we braced for the Life we're dealt
That corner conscienceness ever aware of this conundrum
  Small child never understanding a bitter undercurrent
    ...had no grasp on the inner cursing of a bad hand.

Every dampening disappointment...
  left residual resentment for squandered possibility
Every predetermined scenario 
  left residual resentment for a roadmap doomed to failure

These children born to constrictive conditions...
  Blessed with Intangibles that transcend
Enabling them to conquer a meager existence
 Set back only by the world they're brought into
       Abusive and spiteful...determined to Anchor
 Wanting of nothing but casting invisible ceilings
  leaving a legacy of limitation...
 Stubbornly they obsess on trapping their offspring

Never let them cast ceilings.....confining you to a dim room

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/23/2009 12:40:00 PM
read your soupmail, btw.
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Date: 2/22/2009 2:14:00 PM
I didn't really understand the first couple stanzas (although they're beautiful! "Molten memories" for example! It makes me think of liquid gold) But the last line totally sounds like it could be written to me... it means that much. I won't be confined to that dim room... haha, whatever you originally meant. This is beautiful, and you have an awesome mastery of language. I love the words you use (so don't be surprised if they start showing up in my poetry! Molten! Haha)
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Date: 2/22/2009 11:53:00 AM
Wow, have you been reading me? though the cyber waves LOL. Love and thanks for entering my contest!
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