Poet Destroyer A Poet Free verse

Don'T Leave Me Hanging

Don't leave me hanging sis!


I came out of nowhere with an agenda on the mind
Joining the soup to be near my favorite love
a game I did not plan to play
Until he called upon the first round.
giving it my best shot
Then came round three and more. 
The poets here I started to explore
Not taking my poetry seriously
The writing just happens naturally
now I see why she visits everyone at the soup.
My sister who puts on a show with words
Is adored by her very own group
the Destroyer was my pet name 
She gave me when I was young
So envious of her, I broke the head of her only dolls.
using her poetry was the way she tortured me 
Inside me, she bestowed a poet of mischief
Now I like to tease everyone mind with words


I hate this poem..... Lol..don't read it... It was a joking way back then


(((for contest**Leave me hanging)))

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Cynthia Jones April 13, 2015 at 12:18 PM **taps foot** And why wouldn't I read this Linda? I don't have any sisters...just two annoying brothers. Excellent write you have yourself here. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Roger Horsch December 2, 2013 at 7:39 AM You need to be called the Poet Creator. I'm sure your not a destroyer any more. I look forward to reading more of your older poems They give me insight into who you are as a person....Hugs.... Roger

Debbie Duncan June 26, 2013 at 10:52 PM sisters,, I have 3 of them,,,, nice write,, glad you liked my soul sucker ,,,, you have a great day Linda ;}

Timothy Hicks March 20, 2013 at 10:39 PM This was a breath of fresh air to read. So different and intriguing! I never would have thought you to at one point look at poetry so negatively... funny how things change and as you read more and more you become unintentionally moved by it... so much that you wish to start your own movement. This was such an OPEN read... it's amazing when people can climb out of their holes and spill out all theirs beans for the whole to see... so effortlessly! (sorry for rhyming so much... wasn't intended!)

Harry Horsman January 9, 2012 at 10:36 AM Sweet p.d has left me hanging, hope Royal is ok. harry

John Aaron Green January 6, 2012 at 7:10 PM so nice p.d....you are the best.....

Carol Sunshine Brown January 6, 2012 at 8:24 AM Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week P.D.. Love, Carol

Daver Austin January 5, 2012 at 12:50 PM Thy sister's name be, Woman. Better yet, Just Human. This poem got posted because it communicates. Communication is a prime ingredient of poetry. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Vince Suzadail Jr. January 3, 2012 at 1:54 PM Congrats P.D. on being featured this week.

Poet Destroyer A January 3, 2012 at 6:25 AM How can the soup post this poem...on their featured poems.... Gosh now I wonder how random they are.... This was a joke way back than.... Gurrrrrr

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2010 at 4:58 PM Congratulations, p.D and NOW can we finally let the cat out of the bag and let everyone know who your sister is? Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 4, 2010 at 11:30 AM Congrats P.D. my BBF on your big win in Gareth's Leave me hanging contest.. a great story written so well and another wonderful win for u to enjoy... thankxxx for your fantastic comments on my poetry yesterday.. your BBF with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2010 at 10:34 AM Congratulations PD on your win in Gareth James's contest "Leave Me Hanging". Love, Carol

Marie Harrison June 1, 2010 at 9:34 PM Powerful poem from your pen. I liked it.

Royal Trevino May 2, 2010 at 1:37 PM wow your on the top hundreds... congrats=)

James Fraser May 2, 2010 at 7:04 AM Enjoyable read PD, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James

Jessica Arteaga May 1, 2010 at 8:18 AM haha's and boohoo's but definitely a bit of everything describe, very much like your way of writing, and congrats on your HM n.n

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2010 at 7:43 PM geeez, P.d look how many hits you got with this one!! I think I never said congratulations. Going thru contests finally. It's the weekend, ya know. So happy you got in the winner circle. LUv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 29, 2010 at 8:36 PM Well Well Well congrats my BBF P.D. on your HM in Amy's contest for wishes as your wishes were wonderful to read about..enjoy that honor bestowed on u my BBF... luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 29, 2010 at 5:48 AM How I wish your wishes come true,PD! I hope I'm right that this is about your sister as well--hopefully she reads this and that you will be reunited with her...best of luck with this and with the contest!

Travis Tapley April 28, 2010 at 8:15 PM Ah, yes, a really wonderful poem. I think we all would like to have three wishes sometimes. I probably need more than three!!! I loved the last line, that said it all. Great write.

Derrick Burton April 28, 2010 at 5:22 AM Your style of poetry is diferent, humor mixed with story telling, then again it doesn't sound like your being humerous on purpose, you can tell your a very sarcastic person dependng on what your talkin bout or writing about. I mean that in a good way, it shines in your poetry. Have a great morning or night.:) check out my new poem too, A Vain Time Is Coming!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire April 27, 2010 at 8:42 PM Dear poet destroyer, A very fine Poem for Amy's Contest but I wonder if You followed the criteria for the ContestOne thing Amy said was You couldn't wish someone back alive as I read this I see maybe You are trying to bring Yourself back alive to continue to destroy the one Your Heart truely Loved and also bring her back alive (as i'm sure she feels dead towards You) Good Luck in the Contest ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG

Rachel W April 27, 2010 at 4:50 PM How very sweet.

Allie Lusha April 27, 2010 at 4:23 PM Great write... sibling rivalry always difficult...I see it between my boys...they are like chalk and cheese and hardly speak but one day they will be close, I just know it...good luck in the contest PD, and many thanks for reading mine and your comments always appreciated...Allie

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