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I Saw A Homeless Person (The Other Day) As I Was Going Thru A Fast Food Restaurant's Drive Thru. He Was Rummaging Thru The Trash Bins (Outside The Drive Thru Parking Lot). How I Ached For Him...I Wanted To Hear His Story...How He Came To Be Homeless. I Gave Him My Purchase And Went On My Way...Feeling More Ashamed Of Our Society, Than Satisfied For Him.

A short little guy, walks by, "please don't mind me," he wobbles. His shadowed face it asks, "is it five o'clock already?" He hasn't had a meal, his belly rumbles. He sits outside the local market, waving at each passing patron, how busy they are, ignoring his kind gestures. His kindness is mistook, with leers of suspicions, just a little man, in a big world, so pressured. A lost soul, who once had it all, homeless, people set his measure. A hobo, he's defined, by his, unfortunate life. Is he, only thoughts to you, as bread is, to taste the knife? Do you believe, that all is well, in his world, because he has survived? A kind gesture, would mean so much, he's begging for, acceptance from passersby. Condemned and broken, like the cracked bricks, where he seeks, warmth for the night. Just a little man, holding onto, a simple gesture, to stay connected with life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/15/2019 12:30:00 PM
Hello Vickie Jean Thayer, I met a homeless woman in a coffee shop,and we had a conversation while waiting to place our orders. She said to me,,"It does not bother you to chat with me?" I said,"No it does not". She wished me well and then went on her way. I will always remember her. Have a nice day my friend.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 5/17/2019 12:39:00 PM
Thanks for visiting Darlene De Beaulieu. You Too, My Friend.
Date: 4/27/2019 4:42:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed poem. A fav for me. Well done. Have a great day.
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Date: 4/28/2019 7:40:00 AM
David, Thanks for the kind words. Vickie
Date: 4/23/2019 6:30:00 AM
A touching write...it's almost impossible to explain life...and why we experience what we do...and of course a lovely video...A master musician says it all...
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 4/28/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thanks my friend, song is so strongly expressed.

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