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Dont Hate Me Because I'M Beautiful

Punch DruNk 
in 

syllable havoc.. 

Counting cutters
and their 

woes
of 
tragic.. 

I  

sense sorrow 
and 
sensual sound.. 

Babies 
bred by 

crack 
head 
hounds.. 

I

long to feed them
twisted verse
before your treason
bleeds their worth.. 

As an "Elitist"
scum

I  

crave to cum 

in the mouths
without 
a 

Philosophical curse.. 

But I must 

wait in line
stand behind 
the  

Crowd of cons..
A.K.A.

"Prenatal Johns"
that  

here by solemely swear  
royalty 
comes impaired 

prepared with  

sticky notes
groupie votes
and 
 NO class "quotes" 

So 
before I close 
these  

tasteless prose 

I  

toast to those..     


Pre 

Diss 

Posed...

Copyright © Kimmy Thieleke | Year Posted 2012

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Justin Bordner Date: 2/11/2013 2:30:00 PM Reasoning without sanctified structure making sense from reason too new to vote - cheers Kimmy, on your virtue in the face of vulgar vainity - for me, there is a sense of an obscure philosophical discipline known as epistomology which challenges our understanding of reality through words/language - whatever - good art Kimmy - J.A.B. % Login to Reply

Rockman Pritts Date: 2/9/2013 1:19:00 AM Cut out the crap!! You have a talent. Forget all of the reviews that are written to get you to read the responders poems. This poem is trash because of the way it is written. But it is gold in it's content. Give some color and structure to your work so that when people read it they can smile. Or cry. Or think about what you are saying. I see a star hiding behind a cloud. Move that cloud and let that star shine. Let it shine. Rockman Login to Reply

Vicky Tsiluma Date: 1/23/2013 10:08:00 PM Wow Kimmy! I am loving this! Your message, your style - straight foward yet mysterious - a unique blend indeed. Very beautiful! Login to Reply

George Zamalea Date: 1/13/2013 7:43:00 PM Hello Kimmy, I love it because the expression is Individually unique and remarkable composed. Keep on! Thank you for sharing it. Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 1/13/2013 4:59:00 PM Hi Kimmy....thanks for stopping by....your artistic use of conjugated verbs is free and rhythmic....also filled with a sense of restrained emotion...cool! jimbo Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/12/2013 6:55:00 PM You have a very individual way of expressing yourself, I like your style. Login to Reply

Carma Sanderson Date: 1/7/2013 9:54:00 PM Wow!!! Love it.... Raw and profound great job Kimmy, welcome to the soup my dear... Love Carma Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/5/2013 3:58:00 PM Welcome to poetry Soup, an interesting write. Light & Love Login to Reply

Honestly J.T. Date: 1/2/2013 4:06:00 PM cleverly crafted indeed. I like... - JH Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 12/27/2012 1:07:00 PM Very cleverly crafted... I detect a hint of sensuality tastefully inserted and never elaborated on. Good Job.... Write more..... Jake Login to Reply

Timothy Jacks Date: 12/27/2012 11:27:00 AM Hey Kimmy welcome to the soup. It's a nice place. I mean they ain't kicked me out yet. Write whatevers on your mind. I like this poem. Please continue writing. I encourage it. Login to Reply

Richard Ferry Date: 12/26/2012 11:49:00 PM Like it Feeling you did not finish it Login to Reply

Wayland Bunch Date: 12/26/2012 5:34:00 PM Well as far as the type it is a form of rhyme poetry. I cannot rate it, nor should you desire my rating because I'm new to writing poetry myself. It is interesting, I will say that much. Login to Reply