James Fraser Poet Quatrain

Don'T Go Out Tonight

Don't go out tonight
If there's a full moon in the sky
You may never come back alive
When the ravens nightly fly

Never look to the moon
When they silhouette their shape
You'll be left with lunar blind
Your eyes in a darkened drape

Don't go out tonight
If there's a full moon in the sky
Unless you have no reason to return
Then if that's the case, you'll die






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Sara Kendrick July 27, 2010 at 12:28 PM Great write and scary...Sara

C.C Bloomsfield July 26, 2010 at 1:04 PM Beware . .James this is scary,i'm not going out and i think i'm not gonna sleep either :)C.C

Wilma Neels July 26, 2010 at 4:45 AM I love this dark piece James, glad I read it during the day hehe, hope you're having an awesome Monday bb Wilma

Sharon Tideswell July 26, 2010 at 12:24 AM Okay, okay, I definitely won't go out tonight! Very dark James, great imagery, loads of atmosphere, and one girlie hiding behind the sofa, haha ~ Sharon :)

Dr.Ram Mehta July 25, 2010 at 8:13 PM Very awesome write.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 25, 2010 at 11:51 AM This would be a terrifc entry for the Halloween contest which will be on the scene soon ..James.. very nice and eerie write full of suspense and imagery.. enjoyed.. with luv..