Don'T Give Up the Fight

Don't give up the fight

Vs 1
I know that you have suffered in the silence,
(but) I never knew that you would go this far...
I thought I understood your pain...
now memories...are all that remain...
now I look to the stars

Vs 2
I see in others eyes- they too feel the pain
I pray for them, that it won't be too late
I pray for them, that the day will come
when suffering in silence-comes undone
and no-one is to blame

Chorus
Oh, I know well, all that you're feeling
I can validate, the emptiness you feel inside
I'm the proof that life's worth living
so please, don't give up the fight
no, no, don't give up the fight

Vs 3
I know for you, it's hard to see your beauty
all the love that dwells inside of you
Maybe, I can be a friend,
someone you can trust and can depend
to tell you the truth

Vs 4
You should know, that it takes time to get free
to conquer all the conflict in your mind
The tangled web of tragedy,
need not be your final destiny....
happiness you'll find.

Chorus
Oh, I know well, all that you're feeling
I can validate, the emptiness you feel inside
I'm the proof that life's worth living
so please, don't give up the fight
no, no, don't give up the fight


I know that you have suffered...
in the silence,
(but)
I never knew, 
that  
you 
would 
go 
this 
far...

John Derek Hamilton
October 24,2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Raven Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:54 PM
Hi John, this is such a deep sad song, the words so gentle as they paint their images on the mind. Excellent Lyrics as always. You know how to manipulate emotions so well within your work. A most beautiful fave my friend. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Hamilton Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Hey Mike thanks for the visit and great feedback and especially the fave, take care! John
Teagan Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:49 PM
oh my goodness, John this is so heart wrenching. This would be a beautiful sad song.
Hamilton Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Becca Check out my heart has found a home lyric I uploaded the music finally, hope you like it!
Nicole Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Being a friend, sometimes is all someone needs. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. This is a beautiful song, sad- but tender in its depth. ~ Brandy
Hamilton Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Thanks Brandy, I appreciate your kind visit and nice comment!
Neumann Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 2:21 AM
Wow, that is daunting and it is the truth. A sad truth expressed, but still very encouraging. Egocide is worth it and it is very hard to come anywhere close to it. But suicide is the kill along the wrong road. Many wishes, Kai
Hamilton Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Thanks Kai
Radke Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:55 PM
A beautiful piece of writing. So well done I could almost hear the music. Deb
Hamilton Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Thanks Deb
Horsman Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Wow love the deepness, and the inspiration, John..
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Harry nice to see you pass my way!
Daniel Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Beautiful and compassionate lyric, John:)
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Thanks Jo, nice to see you again!
Moore Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:20 AM
100% Living proof. I could feel the pain.
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Hi Jay thanks for passing by with your kind comments, welcome to my page!
One Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 6:08 AM
Never give up! I love this one, must be my fave song by you... why the darkness my friend?
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Thanks SO, nice to see you pass by again with your kind words.
Sands Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 1:12 PM
Great compassionate Lyric John. I like this! Well done :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Thanks Heidi-Wow! that was fast woohoo! First view first comment, amazing!!
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