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Don't Ever Let Me Go

The sun dips silently over the horizon painting the cloudless sky with shades of red, yellow and peach Arm in arm two figures silhouette in the distance closer and closer they stroll stepping out onto the old fishing pier the pair gaze out over the glasslike pond with the occasional ripple rolling gently Darkness comes upon them and they kiss a long and deep kiss you can hear her speak in the silence "Don't ever let me go" "Don't ever let me go"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/16/2015 6:13:00 PM
"a long and deep kiss.." memorable poem here with some lovely descriptive lines... my favorite part: "he pair gaze out over the glasslike pond /with the occasional ripple rolling gently" What a magical moment! Awesome work. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/13/2015 9:20:00 AM
The reflection of sky's beauty has fallen upon your romantic pen, dear Tim!
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Date: 8/13/2015 7:40:00 AM
Wow Tim a sweet romantic ! What else can she say to conclude,, when it's just a beginning !!
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Date: 8/13/2015 7:19:00 AM
Hello Tim . . . A most beautiful free verse write here filled with such palpable passion and emotion. Very enchanting indeed!! A 7 + FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:25:00 AM
This enchanting post gives me a vivid picture of a sunset sky.Those shades of red ,yellow and peach make up a beautiful painting,and then the other hush hush words whisper romance..A favourite.
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Date: 8/13/2015 12:23:00 AM
Romance, nothing like it. Enjoyed your piece. BG
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Date: 8/12/2015 10:03:00 PM
Love this vivid romantic gem, Tim!!
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Date: 8/12/2015 9:17:00 PM
"Don't ever let me go" Words that are always on our minds. Hugs Eve
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