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Don'T Cry When You Say Goodbye

Life is just like a game we all play,I seem to live my life day by day. Some days are good, some days are bad, but lately most days I am very sad. I think it would be better if I just ended my life,I don't think I have been a good mother and loving wife. I've picked a time and have a date,I am hoping things get better before it's to late. Alot of people tried to help anyway that they could,but when they tried to commit me I got scared and ran. I've been very confused and not sure what to do, I think things would be better, if my life were through. I love my kids dearly,don't get me wrong,but I've been living in pain for way to long. Please don't be sad when you tell me goodbye,I honestly don't want to make anyone cry. Colleen Marie Bono

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/7/2013 10:32:00 AM
Hi, sweet Colleen, going through all the contest i missed.. A great poem of lost emotions, .. ;-) Congratulations-in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. Take Care * Linda
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Date: 7/3/2013 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on win but I would like to echo Johns poem to you. Hugs Rick
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:17:00 AM
And if you answer a call from above - we'll be left with one less thing to love - So, dearest Colleen, please be aware - How much for you we really care. ...... Please stay...... Congrats on your win..... Jake
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Date: 7/3/2013 12:11:00 AM
So touching, it's going in my favs! God bless you!
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Date: 7/2/2013 7:57:00 PM
Oh I hope you find the good all around you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/2/2013 7:21:00 AM
Good to see you posting..a very troubled write ...I have been there..keep ;writing..it helps..congrats on your win BTW. BG
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Date: 7/2/2013 6:26:00 AM
Broken, confused and in pain, emotions flow so clearly from your pen. Nobody can say life is easy and you have conveyed this well in your poem. I'm not sure if this is how you actually feel, but in case it is, keep moving forward through the gloom, days will brighten soon, but it may take some time. Keep that pen flowing my dear. Hug, Connie
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Date: 7/2/2013 1:28:00 AM
this is heartbreaking. i hope you're feeling better - better yet, i hope this isn't the way you're really feeling at all!
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:40:00 PM
soup mail.......... Colleen, a great winning poem, in Nathan's (dark, lost, broken emotions) contest. :-) SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:19:00 PM
congrats ' NATE
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Date: 11/28/2009 12:49:00 PM
Interesting write. Sounds like you feel sad but are able to cope and write it down on paper to rid yourself of some of the pain. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/26/2009 7:03:00 AM
good job.i love this one lots. i really enjoyed alking to you on chat keep writing you'll gte somewhere with this one! :)
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Date: 11/24/2009 2:52:00 PM
This one is great to..!!! Your an awesome writer..!!
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Date: 11/19/2009 9:18:00 PM
Wow you are so in touch with your feeling its scary. I have respect for you I really do keep writing keep the wolf at bay
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Date: 10/18/2009 2:15:00 PM
I enjoyed talking to you on chat. I hope you feel better soon. I'll be praying for you!------Ell P.S. welcome to poetry soup!
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