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Don'T Cry I Love You

Trying to fill the void, makeup all destroyed, standing in your pretty dress, hair all crazy and a mess. Flowers are everywhere, go over and take a chair, watch the people walking by, no one notices as you cry. All here for the same reason, it's like the changing of the seasons, don't worry about me I am fine, maybe you need a glass of wine. All the decorations oh so fancy, being here was never chancy, flowers, music, and the candles, hope it wasn't too hard to handle. I loved you til the end, I held you close my dearest friend, now it's time to put me in the ground, you were my best treasure ever found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/1/2009 1:19:00 PM
Beautiful write Illyanna, sad - but written with strong feeling>>James
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Date: 4/30/2009 10:28:00 AM
AWWW...now am crying even more.....
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Date: 4/29/2009 4:38:00 PM
Very interesting the way you ended. It's show that someone was cherished until your dying day. The flow and rhyme make the poem flow. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 4/29/2009 3:20:00 PM
Aw how sad, I love you. You are such a wonderful person, love you. Love Dreary Leerie, and I would be most dreary if I ever lost you. We'll have to go out Thelma & Loise style......
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Date: 4/29/2009 2:40:00 PM
This is so sad, it brought tears to my eyes. Kat
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