Don'T Be Afraid, Love

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Come out with me, my love.
The sun is shining bright today.
Come let’s enjoy the calm
Despite this mighty winter’s day.

     For look ominous dark clouds gather
     On the periphery of the horizon.
     But it will not rain today, it's calm.
     Only wispy white clouds can be seen rising.

     Sure the trees are bare and icicles
     Hang lonely here and there on darkish branches.
     Still there is no cold wind to speak of.
     Leafless offshoots will be still, not one dances.

Come out with me, my love.
The sun is shining bright today.
Come let’s enjoy the calm
Despite this mighty winter’s day.

     Slowly follow the uneven path
     Until a meandering rill we detect.
     It leads towards a homely tavern
     Two cups of hot black coffee we won't reject.

     Night will soon creep upon our cold world
     Back home we must soon repair as the dark clouds
     Silently gather above our skies,
     Back to our home, away from maddening crowds.

Come out with me, my love.
The sun is shining no more today.
Let’s enjoy the calm at home
Despite this mighty winter’s day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 3/29/2022 6:28:00 AM
Love it Victor!
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:48:00 AM
This is a beautiful write of a beautiful winter’s day Victor. Hope all is well… Belle
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Date: 3/11/2022 3:58:00 AM
Hello Victor, see you have been keeping busy. I like how you have aligned the chorus to the left it highlights the sentiment, very nice indeed...Delice
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Date: 3/10/2022 5:00:00 AM
Excellent lyric, Victor, love the subtle change in the chorus towards the end, makes this all the more meaningful:)
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Date: 3/9/2022 8:22:00 PM
This is a very romantic poem, Victor, and such good rhyme.
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Date: 3/9/2022 4:29:00 PM
It is a lovely and romantic poem. Victor, enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/9/2022 4:17:00 PM
Love it Victor, a sweet romantic poem!
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Date: 3/9/2022 11:28:00 AM
- A pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2022 2:13:00 PM
A day with the one you love, to rest at the end... lovely write. Blessings to you
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Date: 3/7/2022 12:01:00 PM
What a well spent, romantic day in beautiful, wintry surroundings! Then back home to enjoy its coziness, ahead of the storm. A wonderful tale, Victor. :)
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Date: 3/7/2022 7:15:00 AM
Your romantic pen is aflame Victor, who couldn't accept such a romantic invitation. Tom
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Date: 3/7/2022 6:51:00 AM
Hi Victor, I agree one must not be afraid to love. Good content and imagery. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 3/7/2022 4:36:00 AM
A beautiful invitation urging the loved one to come out and ramble free until both reach a meandering rill ! There by its side sipping black coffee will be so lovely! Lovely write, Victor !
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Date: 3/7/2022 2:48:00 AM
Beautiful poem Victor! Debx
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