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Don'T Be Afraid, Love

Come out with me, my love.
The sun is shining bright today.
Come let’s enjoy the calm
Despite this mighty winter’s day.

     For look ominous dark clouds gather
     On the periphery of the horizon.
     But it will not rain today, it's calm.
     Only wispy white clouds can be seen rising.

     Sure the trees are bare and icicles
     Hang lonely here and there on darkish branches.
     Still there is no cold wind to speak of.
     Leafless offshoots will be still, not one dances.

Come out with me, my love.
The sun is shining bright today.
Come let’s enjoy the calm
Despite this mighty winter’s day.

     Slowly follow the uneven path
     Until a meandering rill we detect.
     It leads towards a homely tavern
     Two cups of hot black coffee we won't reject.

     Night will soon creep upon our cold world
     Back home we must soon repair as the dark clouds
     Silently gather above our skies,
     Back to our home, away from maddening crowds.

Come out with me, my love.
The sun is shining no more today.
Let’s enjoy the calm at home
Despite this mighty winter’s day.
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Goff Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Love it Victor!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 10:48 AM
This is a beautiful write of a beautiful winter’s day Victor. Hope all is well… Belle
Skelly Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 3:58 AM
Hello Victor, see you have been keeping busy. I like how you have aligned the chorus to the left it highlights the sentiment, very nice indeed...Delice
Daniel Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 5:00 AM
Excellent lyric, Victor, love the subtle change in the chorus towards the end, makes this all the more meaningful:)
Bayles Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 8:22 PM
This is a very romantic poem, Victor, and such good rhyme.
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 4:29 PM
It is a lovely and romantic poem. Victor, enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra
Kitchin Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 4:17 PM
Love it Victor, a sweet romantic poem!
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 11:28 AM
- A pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 2:13 PM
A day with the one you love, to rest at the end... lovely write. Blessings to you
Buehler Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 12:01 PM
What a well spent, romantic day in beautiful, wintry surroundings! Then back home to enjoy its coziness, ahead of the storm. A wonderful tale, Victor. :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 7:15 AM
Your romantic pen is aflame Victor, who couldn't accept such a romantic invitation. Tom
Y. Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 6:51 AM
Hi Victor, I agree one must not be afraid to love. Good content and imagery. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day-Alexis
George Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 4:36 AM
A beautiful invitation urging the loved one to come out and ramble free until both reach a meandering rill ! There by its side sipping black coffee will be so lovely! Lovely write, Victor !
M  Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 2:48 AM
Beautiful poem Victor! Debx
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