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Don'T Be Afraid- Response To First Poem

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I’m afraid of dying young Of leaving things yet undone I’m afraid I’ll leave this place Yet not leave a single trace I’m afraid I haven’t said All that lives inside my head I’m afraid I’ll disappear And no one will hold me dear. I’m afraid I’ve yet to touch The hearts of those I love so much I’m afraid I’ll never see Who it is I’m meant to be I’m afraid, for can’t you see? Not much time is left for me. I’m afraid, oh, I’m afraid Soon I’ll lie silent in my grave… With my stories yet untold With my dreams yet to unfold With my songs yet unsung With my words yet on my tongue With my passion tucked away With no more prayers left to pray I’m afraid…… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Don't be afraid of dying young of leaving things as yet undone for don't you know that fear will kill and you'll be left without the thrill of living life, that's full and free and making dreams your destiny Don't be afraid of things unsaid but rather fear not having bled it's true once said, the words can sting but then perhaps, much joy they'll bring Then find the strength to give them voice your life will bloom, by will, by choice. Don't be afraid to reach and touch the one you love....so very much for though rejection be the price just take that chance and roll the dice A touch might turn to an embrace and kisses then may grace your face. Don't be afraid to dream your dreams For heaven then much closer seems And death is but a little sleep while you yet live, why do you weep? Don't be afraid of dying, dear then you won't live because of fear So spread your wings and take to flight Soar high above, towards the light Listen close, to one like me You can be all you're meant to be So do not fear the silent grave Live life today, be strong and brave There's nothing worse than living...dead Because there's fear inside your head So live each day up to the brim follow each wish, each dream, each whim and you will chase the fear away Oh, little one, hear what I say..... Don't ever be afraid...... For Silent One's Response to First Poem Contest September 28, 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2016 8:42:00 AM

Pieces like this really demonstrate how truly talented you are. Hugs Rick

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/10/2015 8:42:00 PM

I love the sweet and sage way you coach yourself into the full beauty that is you Eileen. "There's nothing worse than living dead..." You are Passion's prideful martyr, glorious and inspiring Beloved Poetess..J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2015 1:47:00 PM

Hello, Eagle. I'm sorry I'm late with responding to this lovely post of yours. I was out of the country for a few days and have had some problems at work. I was very discouraged and depressed for a few days. I've also been out of internet in my home. Posting on my phone is never the easiest thing to do. Thanks for your kindness to me, Justin. Passion's Prideful Martyr....your words touch my heart. Hugs

Skat A

Date: 10/2/2015 12:59:00 AM

Eileen, Congratulations on the response to your first poem ***SKAT

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2015 9:50:00 AM

Thanks, Skat. I appreciate the visit.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2015 4:15:00 PM

Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats on your win..Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2015 9:51:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Sara. I'm glad you liked this. Hope all is well. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/1/2015 8:22:00 AM

I love the positive response! That's the voice you should listen to. Congratulations Eileen! Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/1/2015 8:33:00 AM

Thanks, Richard. I'm glad you liked it. I was a bit discouraged because hardly anyone was reading it until the contest results were out. Thanks for the visit. You did superbly well. Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/1/2015 1:26:00 AM

Truly beautiful both the poems dear Eileen! Wonderful expressions n win! Big congrats!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/1/2015 2:40:00 AM

Thanks, my dear Dr Upma....Sending you warm hugs, dear.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/30/2015 9:49:00 PM

You always present golden writes my friend.. Congrats on your fine win.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 10:36:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, Robert. Also, thank you for your response to my soupmail. Hugs....

Eve Roper

Date: 9/30/2015 9:40:00 PM

Eileen, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 10:37:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. I'm glad this got a placement and thus more views. As it was....I was very discouraged with the few who visited it. Hugs, dear.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/30/2015 8:46:00 PM

My favorite writes in the contest Eileen. Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 9:30:00 PM

Thank you, Michael. I'm glad it was your favorite! :) Thanks for the visit, dear.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/30/2015 7:14:00 PM

Wow Eileen, these are simply amazing! So uplifting and full of wisdom. I love it! Congrats on a excellent write and win! Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 9:30:00 PM

Thanks, my dear. I so appreciate your visit to this piece. Those thoughts still cloud my mind at times....I just have to believe the response that I wrote to it. Hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/30/2015 7:04:00 PM

Eileen, as I read these words tears began to fill my eyes. I connected with it instantly. Great job. Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 9:32:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. I wish I could say that I don't think about dying....but it comes to my mind now and again. I guess its just the result of having lost my mom. I appreciate your visit, dear.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/30/2015 4:30:00 PM

I never imagined poems about death could be written so beautifully Eileen - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 9:32:00 PM

Awwwwww....you're so sweet, Jan. Thanks for always being so good and kind to me. Love you for it.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2015 9:15:00 AM

Both are amazing!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 9:34:00 PM

Thanks, Richard. I was so tempted to fixed the first one a little.....its not as good as the response. I guess I have developed some. ;) Appreciate the visit.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/29/2015 12:44:00 AM

Follow each wish, each dream, each whim. Great quote Eileen. So inspirational this sentence. Write it down in your quote section this is such an inspiring phrase. Cleverly thought. The poems were on a higher level. Truly enjoyed at 142 am. lol

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 9:35:00 PM

I'm glad you found poetry to entertain you at 1:42 am, Michael. :) I do want to live life to the fullest before my time comes. I used to think I could change the world.....Thanks for the encouraging post.

Pam Deremer

Date: 9/28/2015 3:31:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/30/2015 9:30:00 PM

Thank you, Pam, for reading this piece.

Abdul Malik

Date: 9/28/2015 12:16:00 PM

Hey, this is pretty good. I like it. Good response. Good luck.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/28/2015 12:22:00 PM

Thank you. I'm glad it struck your fancy, Abdul Malik.