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Don'T Be Afraid- Response To First Poem

I’m afraid of dying young
Of leaving things yet undone
I’m afraid I’ll leave this place
Yet not leave a single trace
I’m afraid I haven’t said
All that lives inside my head
I’m afraid I’ll disappear
And no one will hold me dear.
I’m afraid I’ve yet to touch
The hearts of those I love so much
I’m afraid I’ll never see
Who it is I’m meant to be
I’m afraid, for can’t you see?
Not much time is left for me.
I’m afraid, oh, I’m afraid
Soon I’ll lie silent in my grave…
With my stories yet untold
With my dreams yet to unfold
With my songs yet unsung
With my words yet on my tongue
With my passion tucked away
With no more prayers left to pray
I’m afraid……

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Don't be afraid of dying young
of leaving things as yet undone
for don't you know that fear will kill
and you'll be left without the thrill
of living life, that's full and free
and making dreams your destiny
Don't be afraid of things unsaid
but rather fear not having bled
it's true once said, the words can sting
but then perhaps, much joy they'll bring
Then find the strength to give them voice
your life will bloom, by will, by choice.
Don't be afraid to reach and touch
the one you love....so very much
for though rejection be the price
just take that chance and roll the dice
A touch might turn to an embrace
and kisses then may grace your face.
Don't be afraid to dream your dreams
For heaven then much closer seems
And death is but a little sleep
while you yet live, why do you weep?
Don't be afraid of dying, dear
then you won't live because of fear
So spread your wings and take to flight
Soar high above, towards the light
Listen close, to one like me
You can be all you're meant to be
So do not fear the silent grave
Live life today, be strong and brave
There's nothing worse than living...dead
Because there's fear inside your head
So live each day up to the brim
follow each wish, each dream, each whim
and you will chase the fear away
Oh, little one, hear what I say.....

Don't ever be afraid......

For Silent One's Response to First Poem Contest
September 28, 2015

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2016 8:42:00 AM Pieces like this really demonstrate how truly talented you are. Hugs Rick Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 10/10/2015 8:42:00 PM I love the sweet and sage way you coach yourself into the full beauty that is you Eileen. "There's nothing worse than living dead..." You are Passion's prideful martyr, glorious and inspiring Beloved Poetess..J.A.B. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/15/2015 1:47:00 PM Hello, Eagle. I'm sorry I'm late with responding to this lovely post of yours. I was out of the country for a few days and have had some problems at work. I was very discouraged and depressed for a few days. I've also been out of internet in my home. Posting on my phone is never the easiest thing to do. Thanks for your kindness to me, Justin. Passion's Prideful Martyr....your words touch my heart. Hugs

Skat A Date: 10/2/2015 12:59:00 AM Eileen, Congratulations on the response to your first poem ***SKAT Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/2/2015 9:50:00 AM Thanks, Skat. I appreciate the visit.

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/1/2015 4:15:00 PM Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/2/2015 9:51:00 AM Thanks for the visit, Sara. I'm glad you liked this. Hope all is well. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/1/2015 8:22:00 AM I love the positive response! That's the voice you should listen to. Congratulations Eileen! Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/1/2015 8:33:00 AM Thanks, Richard. I'm glad you liked it. I was a bit discouraged because hardly anyone was reading it until the contest results were out. Thanks for the visit. You did superbly well. Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/1/2015 1:26:00 AM Truly beautiful both the poems dear Eileen! Wonderful expressions n win! Big congrats! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/1/2015 2:40:00 AM Thanks, my dear Dr Upma....Sending you warm hugs, dear.

Robert Lindley Date: 9/30/2015 9:49:00 PM You always present golden writes my friend.. Congrats on your fine win. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2015 10:36:00 PM Thanks ever so much, Robert. Also, thank you for your response to my soupmail. Hugs....

Eve Roper Date: 9/30/2015 9:40:00 PM Eileen, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2015 10:37:00 PM Thanks, Eve. I'm glad this got a placement and thus more views. As it was....I was very discouraged with the few who visited it. Hugs, dear.

Michael Tor Date: 9/30/2015 8:46:00 PM My favorite writes in the contest Eileen. Congratulations on your well deserved win! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2015 9:30:00 PM Thank you, Michael. I'm glad it was your favorite! :) Thanks for the visit, dear.

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 9/30/2015 7:14:00 PM Wow Eileen, these are simply amazing! So uplifting and full of wisdom. I love it! Congrats on a excellent write and win! Hugs Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2015 9:30:00 PM Thanks, my dear. I so appreciate your visit to this piece. Those thoughts still cloud my mind at times....I just have to believe the response that I wrote to it. Hugs

Alexis Y. Date: 9/30/2015 7:04:00 PM Eileen, as I read these words tears began to fill my eyes. I connected with it instantly. Great job. Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7 Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2015 9:32:00 PM Thanks, sweetie. I wish I could say that I don't think about dying....but it comes to my mind now and again. I guess its just the result of having lost my mom. I appreciate your visit, dear.

Jan Allison Date: 9/30/2015 4:30:00 PM I never imagined poems about death could be written so beautifully Eileen - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2015 9:32:00 PM Awwwwww....you're so sweet, Jan. Thanks for always being so good and kind to me. Love you for it.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/29/2015 9:15:00 AM Both are amazing! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2015 9:34:00 PM Thanks, Richard. I was so tempted to fixed the first one a little.....its not as good as the response. I guess I have developed some. ;) Appreciate the visit.

Michael Tor Date: 9/29/2015 12:44:00 AM Follow each wish, each dream, each whim. Great quote Eileen. So inspirational this sentence. Write it down in your quote section this is such an inspiring phrase. Cleverly thought. The poems were on a higher level. Truly enjoyed at 142 am. lol Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2015 9:35:00 PM I'm glad you found poetry to entertain you at 1:42 am, Michael. :) I do want to live life to the fullest before my time comes. I used to think I could change the world.....Thanks for the encouraging post.

Pam Deremer Date: 9/28/2015 3:31:00 PM I enjoyed your poem. Thank you. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2015 9:30:00 PM Thank you, Pam, for reading this piece.

Abdul Malik Date: 9/28/2015 12:16:00 PM Hey, this is pretty good. I like it. Good response. Good luck. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/28/2015 12:22:00 PM Thank you. I'm glad it struck your fancy, Abdul Malik.