Don'T Ask To Go To the Bathroom

Previously entitled: "Rules are Not Always Cool" Silly Jilly could not break the rule: Stay in class during tests at the school. Soon each test-taking kid could all smell what she did in her pants! Rules are not always cool! by Andrea Dietrich For PD's Pooping Contest: Category: Don't ask to go to the bathroom!
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Hicks Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 10:06 AM
I was told you can write a mean limerick from Russell... so here I am! Lol... I thought at first "oh that's not so bad... it's just #1 after all"... then I realized it was for a... pooping contest? That would have been terrible if it were me! Great limerick!
Breidenthal Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 6:51 PM
Hahaha this was cute :) Always, Laura
Song Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 6:28 AM
Ha ha haha ha ah ah aha ah aha a....Love the boldface print to emphasize the main rule! Love it! Gwendolen (Oh, I wrote a new one...)
A   Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Hello,Andrea I think you did awesome in the poem it teaches kids!;},,Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA}i{
Devnath  Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 1:27 PM
A cool Funny, loved because happens practically. Loved always bl
Susan Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 5:32 PM
ha ha! this is a good one! that poor girl...and all those poor noses! p.u!
Cheesman Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 12:19 AM
hehehehe! the memories that this poem brings to mind. Yes rules definitely not cool when in certain situations. lol Cheers Shaz
K. Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 10:19 AM
Hahaha! Oh gosh, so this is your poopy poem, funny stuff, sweetie pie! Gosh, this reminds me so much of my classmate in gradeschool, he couldn't hold it in either-- and shucks he didn't have any tissue and for the life of me, I Don't know why he had to put his soiled hanky on his polo pocket!! I could still see that poopy hanky in my mind's eye til now o_O! Congrats on your win, sweetie! Sorry I am being stingy with comments now, will just do one comment at a time for now :( hugs to you!
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 3:48 PM
omg,how disgusting. hahaha
Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Great humor..Great to see you in the winners' list..Congrats..Sara
Babcock Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 1:08 PM
ha ha this had me laughing and yes the smell would be rank. Cute one. love phyl
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s "Pooping" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 1:11 AM
Congrats on your smelly win- Oh poor kid xx
A   Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 9:59 PM
ha ha, Andrea, I see you hit many of these poems, , I'm holding my nose all the way down the list... ha ha ha! , the smell and yucky image, made me laugh so much... thank you for the smiles, and the laugh... I think poop is so gross , but, funny when spoke of... he he he!!! ,,Congratulations for your awesome pooping entry! thank you for supporting my contest. Take care ~ALWAYS * the one and only :-) PD
May Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 8:19 PM
congrats on your win Andrea
Williams Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 2:33 PM
Andrea congrats on your win.david
Hunter Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 1:54 PM
No...but this poem is...Congrats!
Johnson Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 10:12 PM
the smellathon had no lid, coolest rule she ever did, where are you toilet ...hid..
Horne Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 11:16 AM
LOL, poor Jilly! Had a chuckle at this one - glad you entered it for PD's contest. Have I said: Congrats on all your wins?
Song Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 2:15 PM
Holy Toledo, Dietrich! hahaha...this one rocks! How in the world did PD come up with this one!! Back to gradeschool until this one is judged! hilarious stuff!! :) Gwendolen
Kapoor Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 11:31 PM
Beautifully sketched a big laughing stuff for others, but a sad thing for the poor child. Wonderful write my friend. My good wishes for your contest entry. I have posted a new poem and not the series one today. Love and best wishes..Ravindra..Andrea Dietrich
Maverick Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 1:29 PM
Well it can happen Andrea.. I just hope she learned to be cool toward the "overbearing type of rules"
Grisetti Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Accidents happen often when in elementary school, something I learned quite often when teaching first grade. Great limeriack.
Neels Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 10:12 AM
The poor child lol, I am done reading these smelly ones ;) luv Wilma
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May 18, 2012 at 8:13 AM
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Horsman Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 5:17 AM
Andrea like the title this is cool too. good luck. harry
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