Don'T Ask

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Camelia hurt by frost or freezing temperatures which looks like mine..Sara

Don't ask lovely Star Magnolia Nor blueberries' bell blooms Japanese Magnolia won't tell Lest quickly seasons assume Who browned the awesome pink blossoms Or turned camelia squishy Was it the brown nervous squirrel With his dancing tail swishy It must have been Bobcats at night Who climbed in blooming trees Then painted tips with brown markers Not the northerly breeze Maybe unfinished???

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Robert Johnson

Date: 3/28/2017 12:39:00 PM

The life and time's of flora and fauna. In the Spring no one asked them if they wanna. And when it came their time to die, no one asked why.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/28/2017 1:19:00 PM

We had warm days and it seemed that spring was here then a cold snap put some of the spring buds and blossoms in harms way..Some of the early peach crop is gone and some of this year's blueberries has gone the way of the ax..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Barry Stebbings

Date: 2/19/2017 5:32:00 AM

Very good, Sara. Interesting point of view, like the last line. With regard to your comment, I think it is complete. // Barry

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2017 6:57:00 AM

Barry, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the kind comment..Yes, I agree that this one could be finis'..Sara