Donkey's Delusion

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<>Donkey's Delusion hummingbird flits by, searching for nectar to sip, doesn't realize he's too big for the feeder By: Eve Roper 9/23/2015

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Pam Deremer

Date: 9/24/2015 2:59:00 PM

Cute poem. Loved the picture!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/27/2015 11:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Pam. Couldn't resist to write a poem when I saw the photo.

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/24/2015 10:43:00 AM

Loved it. Once had a mocking bird keep tipping the feeder to get at the necter... And it worked... Maybe the Donkey had a sweet tooth too. Loved your write.

Eve Roper
Date: 9/27/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thank you, Carol, the sweet nectar does attract the best of them. Hugs Eve

Mark Woods

Date: 9/24/2015 1:05:00 AM

Cool picture, cool story. Both made me laugh!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/27/2015 11:45:00 AM

Thank you, Tim, I'm glad it tickled you. I got the result I was looking for. Hugs Eved

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/24/2015 12:25:00 AM

lol! cute...

Eve Roper
Date: 9/27/2015 11:44:00 AM

Thank you, Kim, for always been here for me with your support. Hugs Eve