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Done , is 2012

Done , is 2012 A cloud that never showered A seed deprived of sunshine A sea of dark unjust hands Ah!...Done.Deeds all done.

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Date: 1/27/2013 6:37:00 PM
wow... love this one again.... I hope this year I keep myself under the best clouds ad sunshine... no more depriving myself.... enjoyed...LINDA
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Date: 1/8/2013 8:52:00 PM
Mehnaz, wow..wow... now this is a magic pen... and i love that it is finally over with... looking forward to closing this 2013 deal...lol...to early hu...love this poem..pd
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/9/2013 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Linda....
Date: 1/3/2013 6:23:00 PM
As for me, I had a lot of good memories from 2012. There were some dark moments that cast there shadow over the year, in particular the shooting of the Children in the USA, and the devastation in NewYork.
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/8/2013 2:23:00 PM
Yes and Thank you Richard.... Life gives ups and downs....
Date: 1/3/2013 2:08:00 PM
yes this powerful poem, packs a punch...
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/8/2013 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Harry, for stopping by.
Date: 1/1/2013 10:03:00 AM
a dark one for the dastardly 2012. He had his moments though!!!
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/8/2013 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 1/1/2013 9:01:00 AM
all done,so lets all begin the new year with a positive mind and positive intentions,great write Mehnaz,check out my PRAYER 2013
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 1/8/2013 2:26:00 PM
Thank You Richard for the 'Prayer'...