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Thanks Jan for the edit!

Old Donald an out of work tramp retired to a new nudist camp what he hadn't been told was the pool water's cold which reduced his prospects when damp

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Date: 8/21/2024 5:58:00 PM
Heh-heh! This is first-class, Karen. Is there a contest for this one?! A winner for certain! Smiles, Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 8/21/2024 6:10:00 PM
No contest. I just am trying my hand at limerick writing
Date: 8/21/2024 2:24:00 AM
Lol, you're on a roll now Karen. Tom
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Karen Jones
Date: 8/21/2024 3:46:00 AM
I keep trying but Jan’s are better

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