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Thanks Jan for the edit!

Donald

Old Donald an out of work tramp
retired to a new nudist camp
what he hadn't been told
was the pool water's cold
which reduced his prospects when damp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 5:58 PM
Heh-heh! This is first-class, Karen. Is there a contest for this one?! A winner for certain! Smiles, Gershon
Jones Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 6:10 PM
No contest. I just am trying my hand at limerick writing
Cunningham Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 2:24 AM
Lol, you're on a roll now Karen. Tom
Jones Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 3:46 AM
I keep trying but Jan’s are better
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