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Dominoes Falling

Dominoes Falling I wake as the rain greets me on the face To realize you wept until your bliss was drained From edges of lips well licked Lies the deepest desires that Brought Two broken souls to a Valley long forgotten Scream now, my dear, for this we live for, Each cut thrusting us towards divinity’s floors As this rush has us walking on all fours, And we realize that we are Broken and Flawed Left with these sharp edges to only draw blood Our story ended before it took flight Its future never to see the light, Wasting time on each other For a fantasy called “forever” As forever ends with no caution

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/4/2013 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win... This one seems to have some of the same emotional core as "Domino Vows," a poem found in my portfolio.... Great writing, Ronny......Jake
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/27/2013 5:23:00 PM
congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/27/2013 1:42:00 PM
Hello Ronny, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:30:00 AM
Life is not perfect for sure..Great winning work..Congrats on your time of glory...Sara
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Date: 7/26/2013 8:15:00 PM
Some things once shattered never recover. WOW.. great last line :)
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