Domino Effect

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I cheated my approach to oblivion. Making threats when the boat is breaking. The years ahead of us feel like a riddle. The path is hazy, and the result is unclear. We shall all suffer the consequences. For the fate of one is the fate of all. A chain of failures is like a domino effect. Written: March 11, 2023

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Valsa George

Date: 3/12/2023 10:09:00 PM

We are now suffering from a domino effect of uncertainities falling on us one by one. The future is so uncertain ! Well depicted the conundrum of life.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/12/2023 5:18:00 AM

The years ahead of us feel like a riddle. The path is hazy, and the result is unclear--well said my friend.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/11/2023 11:40:00 PM

Great write Sotto. Funny you wrote this as I was thinking the same thing just today.