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Domestics - Blue Berry Pancake

Simmering,hot, pancakes, flushed. Battered, beating, bruised, Syrup, sweet, melted, dripping, Brown now, peeling, ripping Dark berries, smashed oozing bluish - black red, Hands and words tossed instead, Pancake Burnt! Pancake dead!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/31/2016 8:00:00 PM
shruti, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:34:00 AM
I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Shruti. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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