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Domestic Scene

DOMESTIC SCENE

by the alley
paint bare and splintered
this leaning    green fence
inside    safe in their garden
two old women chattering

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 3/2/2014 5:29:00 PM

Charateristic of one of the great impressionist painters, Daver. Love the imagery of this write! Keep well, love, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2014 1:27:00 AM

I really like when you write tanka poems like this one, Daver. thanks for visiting so many of my poems tonght. I was playing big catchup today and Soup kept freezing. UGGGG. I hate when it takes so long to do comments. REally appreciate your support in all these years of poetry!

James Peranteau

Date: 2/28/2014 8:04:00 PM

This is a wonderfully profound write dear poet ! I love it ! Though, as you know; I's like my old ladies in lavender cashmere tops and tight blue jeans ! *smiles* Great write Dave ! Have a wonderful weekend my friend.....much love, james

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/28/2014 4:22:00 PM

Thanks for the information on what the Kings men are attempting. I believe that this is going to be a long running tale Daver I guess there will many a twist in the story..'

Funom Makama

Date: 2/28/2014 11:11:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/28/2014 5:18:00 AM

Domestic diva's chat, I love that. Daver, you rock! My best, chuck

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/27/2014 1:21:00 PM

Or was it their knees knocking together Daver,? you will have to do another one in case it is their teeth, if they are fat its the teeth..' so we kneed another write Daver..'

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/27/2014 10:48:00 AM

I love your work Dave-r..glad to read it again. BG