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Domestic Order

The kitchen's disinfected, the worktops squeaky clean, The laundry's in the wardrobe and nothing's left in the machine. The crockery is washed and dry, it's stacked in cupboards, looking neat. There's just one nagging problem, I've got nothing left to eat!

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Date: 2/27/2023 8:41:00 AM
LOL. For me, sometimes I don't want to eat because it will only spoil the order and I'd have to clean again! Cute write John. :)
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John Davison
Date: 2/27/2023 4:52:00 PM
Glad this verse resonated with you and your regular dilemma.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things