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5/13/2025 for Let's Do The Chicken Splash Poetry Contest sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

So, you turned on the news, and it gave you the blues, and you almost hurled, at who's leading the free world, and your teeth are grit tight, on explosive dynamite, and the world's so sad, and you're feeling bad, and you have drowning fears, in the flooding of your tears? Well... Cheer up buddy! Don't do nothin' rash. Take your flattened feet, and do the splash! Chickens are doing it for miles around! They're all doin' it to the bawk b'bawk sound. You say, you're not a chicken - you're a duck? Don't be thinkin' you're out of luck. You've got flappy feet - tap out a rhyme! Soon you'll be splashin' in chicken time. Whenever I'm thinking WTF, I think like a chicken or a duck, and I dance to the hit that's a smash. I get down and do the Chicken Splash.

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Date: 5/19/2025 2:48:00 AM
A fun read David! I’m sure the judge will like it! Good luck!
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David Crandall
Date: 5/19/2025 3:28:00 PM
Thanks Karen!
Date: 5/15/2025 10:14:00 AM
- A funny poem, David...good luck in the contest ... chicken time :))) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 5/15/2025 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, yep, I'm living in chicken time!
Date: 5/13/2025 8:11:00 PM
Chickens are doing it for miles around! They're all doin' it to the bawk b'bawk sound. LOL
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David Crandall
Date: 5/14/2025 12:40:00 PM
:D
Date: 5/13/2025 7:56:00 PM
A humorous read David, when you waddle like a chicken or a duck, do you go barefoot in the muck…. Beryl
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David Crandall
Date: 5/14/2025 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Beryl! do don't get down off a chicken, you get down off a duck, so when I go barefoot, I say "cluck cluck cluck".
Date: 5/13/2025 7:31:00 PM
Whoa how creative dear david! I wouldn't have thought of something so creative for the prompt! And the way your words flow is truly lyrical! Clever! Lol for some reason i can imagine chicken dance to this! The last line made me smile! Pleasure reading! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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David Crandall
Date: 5/13/2025 7:44:00 PM
aw, thanks Ink - just being silly - lol

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