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10/29/2024 for Still Holding My Own Poetry Contest sponsored by Margarita Lillico

Do you think that you've broken my heart? Or I'm hopeless now that we're apart? I'm fine now that you're gone, But just don't turn it on - My sink is a modern work of art.

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Date: 10/29/2024 10:52:00 AM
breakups are a draining experience, eh? as long as you've fixture issues, can't really work about hers... ba-dum tss!
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Date: 10/29/2024 11:08:00 AM
haha, yep, another one down the drain!

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