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May.4. 2024
Picture Prompt Poetry Contest
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Dogs in Queue

How happy the dogs are to find a tree. Raising one leg, what fun it is to pee. They look a disciplined crew. All are lined up in a queue. When all are done, a flowing stream you’ll see!
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Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 10:04 PM
Trying to get a comment thru to you. Love this.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 9:40 AM
Great humor. Loved your limerick. Best for a win. Blessings.
Rolland Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:50 PM
so much fun, is it a true story ? i guess not photographers are so talented, what a surprise, thanks poet
Empress Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 11:05 AM
Cute haha, I can imagine and visualise these dogs in a queue and what to expect following that scenario! You can do any theme and any form so very well sweet valsa. Your use of rhymes here and how youv written this truly stood out for me! I especially loved “ Raising one leg, what fun it is to pee. They look a disciplined crew.” ahha! Thats cute!!! “ When all are done, a flowing stream you’ll see!“ definitely! Hah! Best wishes for the contest! Youve nailed it! Sending always light
One Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 9:54 AM
Great limerick Valsa, best of luck in the contest dear poet..
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 9:31 AM
Good one, Valsa! You are always good at limericks! Hugs ~ Kim
Poet Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 7:27 AM
Excellent Limerick about the contentment and delight that canines derive from the ritual of peeing on a tree to indicate their territory. You did an excellent job of capturing the dogs' organic behavior and the amusing thought of them waiting in line to pee.
George Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:24 AM
Didn't know they could be this organised, lol. Feel good because some humans can't. Nice one V.
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