Doggie in the window --- revised
How much is that hot dog on the griddle
The one that is so plump and moist
How much is that hot dog that is cooking
My hungry belly has a choice
They all look delicious and yummy
I can hear the grumble in my tummy
Different sizes and flavors--- it's insane
Lots of tasty toppings--- just not plain
I want to eat one I can savor
My tastebuds will enjoy each flavor
I don't want to overload my jaw
But I shove them inside --- just not raw
How much is that hot dog on the griddle
The one that is so plump and moist
How much is that hot dog that is cooking
My hungry belly has a choice
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