Doggie Devotion

grateful for rescuing me
your love for my family
thank you for your bravery
let me lick your wounds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Radke Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Oh. Well done, well done. I am amazed at how you captured the photo posted in this contest so perfectly, with so few words, so very well written. Excellent. Love, Deb
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January 20, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Hello again Eiken, What a wonderful poem for the contest. So full of love and loyalty ...... As Always, Shar
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January 20, 2011 at 11:20 AM
In the photo it DOES look like the dog is trying to lick the firefighter's burn wounds, Eiken. Some of us dragged on and on with our interpretations of the photo, but you said sooo much in just four lines. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:53 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Eiken. Wishing you a wonderful day. The best to you in Joyce's contest. Love, Carol
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January 20, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Love the last line which complement the rest of the poem, good luck in the contest. Harry
Neels Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 5:23 AM
This is a beauitiful entry for Joyce's contest Eiken... Good luck to you with this gem, love Wilma
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