Dog Waiting Tanka

His dog lies waiting
for his master to come homefFrom the battle field
No matter how long he's gone
Lies down head on paws waiting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Patient and loving pet..Enjoyed reading..Sara
Roberts Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 5:47 AM
Thank you Sara
May Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 5:45 PM
such loyal animals ...nice write Seren
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December 10, 2012 at 7:13 PM
thank you Joseph ..Seren
Harper Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Excellent, Seren, you capture the essence of dog behavior and his relationship to his owner
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 4:14 PM
Thank you Sheri
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