Dog Island

Summer days, a sheltered cove
I close my eyes....and I'm back again..
This hideaway, where oft we came
That bears our names, on giant oaks
Carved long ago by childish hands.
A place that takes me to my yesterdays
Where willow trees hung low, 
Over river wild, and thorny berry branches
Would prick our legs, where I could 
Descend to the water, to look for
Frogs, and fish, and where a hot summer
Sun, would find it's way through the branches
And warm our backs, till slippery wet with drips...

Remembering, it's my eyes that mist...
Longing for days
When my legs were young, tan, and strong
When I could run up and down the trails
Finding other coves and hiding places
And old tires tied with rope hanging and waiting
For our young hands to hold tight
And swing high and wide over the water
Feeling the shock of the cold and the wonder
Of a long ago summer day

Today, back up the steep bank...I tread carefully
Older legs, more carefully I  step....
But thankful to revisit a yesterday
This happy place, on another lovely, summer day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 8/17/2009 8:29:00 AM
Is this in Trudy's contest, Carrie? If not, it should be ... Glad you like George Clooney. I do too, he's a lot of fun ... and sooo sexy!
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Date: 8/14/2009 1:58:00 AM
Great to re-visit the past Carrie.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/13/2009 4:57:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fantastic writing with us today Carrie. May the sun shine on you today making your heart joyful. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:38:00 PM
a wonderful childhood memory makes this an interesting poem, we all have places like this in our past.
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:23:00 PM
Nicely written memory. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:10:00 PM
What a delightful memory, Carrie! There is a "Dog Island" in North Florida. You can only get there by boat, but it's filled with "coves and hiding places" and I'd love to grab a rope and swing into the water again. Almost did that Monday on a 12-mile canoe trip. But, like you, I tread more carefully than I did as a child. Lovely poem! Love, Carolyn
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