Alex Duffy Poet Free verse

Does He Love You Right

Does he hold you and treat you right?
When you need him is he by your side?
Does he look after you and take you on days out?
If he doesn't, then let me be your escape route

Does he tell you why he adores you?
Does he hold the door open for you?
Does he buy you flowers and cook for you?
Does he notice when you change your hair and there's a new look on you 

Does he make time for you when he's busy?
Does he tell you that you're pretty?
Does he hold your hand in public?
Does he pay attention to your conversation subjects?

Is your heart in safe hands?
Does he love you?, is he a great man? 
If the answers are yes then I'll leave and won't ask again
But if the answers no, then give me a chance and pass on him

Does he Hold you and make you feel special?
Does he treat you on the same level?
Is he willing to commit for the long run?
If he doesn't then you've got the wrong one

Does he hold you and treat you right?
When you need him is he by your side?
Does he look after you and take you on days out?
If he doesn't, then let me be your escape route

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