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does anyone care?

I know you're out there
    I can hear you ... typing, rat-a-tat-tat 
      I echo it, but place with intent
       each finger-step just SO
      each notion a necklace of keystrokes
    individually-knotted
pearlescent beauties, round ...

I squeeze my mind of chaos, tamped and blessed
thoughts gossamer, these tapestries I've pressed
'twixt leaves of crimped reprieves if dispossessed

       I scream without a face
   my voice of subtle silence howling windward
 I scratch messages on cell walls
my red breath burnt with the truth of negligence
 exquisite sculptures ...
   the words dripping like stigmata
       Madonna's bloody tears, each precious ...

I place these golden dreams in phrased bequests
bright dazzled shining gems of hearts expressed
adorned with tender odes to thrum their breasts

how do such ears not hear?
    how can such breath-embezzling eyes not
      capture?!?
       should your own gray matter dance a-tongue
       its metallic tang of truth would be lost
      I would BEG you hate me ... with every fibre
    but that is not love's opposite
THAT demon is the monster called 'Indifference' ...

I knot the rope wrapped 'round my throat, aware
that you and yours are pleased to kick the chair
is there naught ONE poetic soul ... should care??





Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, March 19, 2020

( photographic art created copyright-free by the poet with processing software at Gala AI )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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