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Deer, Doe, Nature, Wildlife, Fawn

Doe eyes feminine and fearful appear in the darkened woods sheltered by autumn brush what beauties graceful necks and tanned hides silver and swift like aliens they stand caught in the headlights of civilization 4/10/20

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/29/2020 5:44:00 PM
Nature and highlight Innate and sweetly pure Bravo Ma!
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Date: 4/28/2020 8:16:00 PM
Oh that's good. I love an ending like that, that slaps you awake. Splendid piece of poetry Janis, congratulations for your win! xomo
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Date: 4/28/2020 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations Janis
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Date: 4/28/2020 5:47:00 PM
Love the first two lines! Catches our attention. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/19/2020 12:33:00 PM
Congrats, I love your poem on these gentle souls. Written with Grace.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/24/2020 11:20:00 AM
I appreciate your comments, Thanks.
Date: 4/17/2020 2:08:00 AM
Janis congrats on your win!;)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/24/2020 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Brenda. Keep safe. Blessings Janis.
Date: 4/12/2020 4:08:00 AM
Very good, but it could have done with more poetic "sprinklers" - some alliteration or unexpected words.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/24/2020 11:19:00 AM
I am honored by my placement.
Date: 4/10/2020 3:24:00 PM
I inhaled your doe description deep inside my own doe imagery reaction all the while thinking of my husband who hunts; such a contradiction! I would hunt, were it necessary for survival, otherwise, those innocent eyes would have me paralyzed with remorse! I think this will place well in the contest, it sure did with me. CayCay
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Date: 4/24/2020 11:22:00 AM
I could not stand to shoot one of these lovelies. The meat would not taste good.