Dodo-Itsu-Not a Dodoitsu

With long legs and elongated beak he came,
wearing trunks and a black sash 'round his waist,
smelling of 'High Karate' and wearing a blue headband,
the 'bad-seed' leader of Jujitsu and martial arts, we all faced!

This was no panty-waist or mealy-mouth bird-brain,
no chicken-livered fowl that worked for scratch,
No!  Here was a true blue hero, a real egg-ample to us all,
Dodo-itsu - master fighter, a feathered leader that all hens longed to catch!

For years he taught us how to fight with beak, claw and wing,
and then for some strange reason, he packed up and went away,
some say that he got too old to teach and then became extinct,
but I believe that he was called to battle and still is fighting today!

©Jane Richer
02/26/2005
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 27, 2012 at 7:08 AM
Another outstanding piece Jane. Love, Carol
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February 27, 2012 at 2:36 PM
That style of poetry was just perfect for something foul, haha! Love Jane
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