Dodoitsu the Form

An albertine goodbye

a delicate petalled rose
flutters slowly from on high,
upon the green sward,to lie-
dying sans a sigh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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La France Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 10:48 AM
Brian, a beautiful poem and a lovely form too !
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December 16, 2019 at 11:01 AM
Yes Constance,combines the beauty of both haiku and tanka in one
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