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An albertine goodbye a delicate petalled rose flutters slowly from on high, upon the green sward,to lie- dying sans a sigh

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Date: 12/16/2019 10:48:00 AM
Brian, a beautiful poem and a lovely form too !
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/16/2019 11:01:00 AM
Yes Constance,combines the beauty of both haiku and tanka in one