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Dodoitsu

It didn't happen more than once that tripping into lust for next time I was walking with better shoes on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/27/2009 1:08:00 PM
am visiting this poem again! still cool! Sue, jim
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Date: 4/18/2009 10:46:00 AM
cool dodoitsu! Sue! with "better shoes" used wonderfully as a metaphor for experience! love it! and thanks for very gracious comments! Jim
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Date: 1/26/2009 5:27:00 AM
I had to look this form up! Love the humor/double meaning here. Great job! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/25/2009 2:30:00 PM
I like the piece alot Sue. Good job!
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