Dodoitsu

It didn't happen more than
once that tripping into lust
for next time I was walking
with better shoes on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 1:08 PM
am visiting this poem again! still cool! Sue, jim
Goff Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 10:46 AM
cool dodoitsu! Sue! with "better shoes" used wonderfully as a metaphor for experience! love it! and thanks for very gracious comments! Jim
Winter Avatar
January 26, 2009 at 5:27 AM
I had to look this form up! Love the humor/double meaning here. Great job! Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 2:30 PM
I like the piece alot Sue. Good job!
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