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Do You See What I See

'When Jupiter aligns with Mars' all I see are tiny stars 'When the moon is in the Seventh House' I am in my wife's doghouse 'Harmony and understanding' My car, my kids be demanding 'Golden living dreams of visions' What I wear evokes derision They call this 'The Age of Aquarius' ~ I taste turmeric on asparagus ___________________________________ Lines 1, 3, 5, and 7 are taken from 'The Age of Aquarius,' a hit song released by 'The Fifth Dimension' in 1969.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/11/2021 12:45:00 PM

The Age of Aquarius is one of my all time favorite albums, so I enjoyed this one!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/9/2021 8:24:00 AM

When you’re in the wife’s doghouse, do you bark or do you shout. Enjoyed the read and love that song… Belle

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/9/2021 5:45:00 PM

Actually I twist, then I shout: 'Oy, vey'z'mir. Gevalt. Oy, vey'z'mir....' lol. Thanks, Belle. :) gw

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/8/2021 5:57:00 PM

Lol! Gershon, This is hilarious; I laughed out loud reading this one. To answer your question, I can't say that I do( see what you do) On second thought, I do, because you just lent me your lense. I enjoyed the read. Off to listen to the song again( I I forgot the lyrics:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2021 6:01:00 PM

I love the answer you gave, Alexis! Thanks a million. Joy forever, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2021 4:10:00 PM

LOL!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2021 5:51:00 PM

Laugh in soft. :) gw

Judy Ball

Date: 6/8/2021 2:29:00 PM

This one made me laugh Gershon. Loved that last line. Harmony and love abounding, sympathy and peace surrounding . Well here maybe but in the east it's hell on earth. Loved this one Gerwshon. God Bless, JB

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2021 5:51:00 PM

How far east we talking now, Judy? ~ The Orient, perhaps? lol. :) gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/8/2021 10:30:00 AM

Well that took me back fifty odd years wow.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2021 5:50:00 PM

And I've always thought that '50' was an even number! Learn something new every day, it seems. ~ Old Dog Trix

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2021 10:26:00 AM

“And Love will be in the stars.” Your poem brings back memories. I was a kid when this came out. I enjoyed your poem Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2021 5:49:00 PM

Aha. I was already in my '19th hour' when this one was released. Still hum it sometimes, amazingly enough. Thanks, Richard.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/8/2021 5:14:00 AM

A most pleasant read this morning, Gershon ~

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2021 5:56:00 PM

Thanks you so much, Line.

Kaveesha Ruwindi

Date: 6/8/2021 1:14:00 AM

Lol that end! Well done! :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2021 5:46:00 PM

Gotta end with a bang, you know! lol. Thanks Kaveesha. Take care, Gershon

Anselmo Boles

Date: 6/7/2021 11:38:00 PM

The song reminds me of my youth. Wife and kids, a challenge indeed. Turmeric and asparagus though, never had that combination before This is laugh out loud Goood Gershon!...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2021 5:44:00 PM

Oh, it's so delicious, Anselmo. Turmeric is akin to curry powder, and YOU KNOW how well that goes with asparagus. ~ Toilet Bound

David Scott

Date: 6/7/2021 10:05:00 PM

Lovly write very clever wording anythinh to do with stats and the moon l like

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2021 5:42:00 PM

Thank you, David! Starlight and Moonbeams, Gershon