Richard Lamoureux Poet I do not know?

Do You Remember Me

They walk silently along my hallways.
Floors littered with faded finery.
Do you remember my Granduer?
I had once been called the Queen of the sea.
Pulled down to the ocean's floor.
Swaying silently, so many sad souls
They are entombed here 
Forever a part of me 
Left to wander my halls
Sharing this watery hell
Faces frozen in skeletal grins
Evidence of our eternal sadness
Fish now swim across my stage
The band is silent
Still I remember
I absorbed them note by note
They played till my last moment
Yet it was not for my benefit
For I had betrayed them
My promises were empty
Temptation, travel, time together
Some mercifuly escaped
What did they remember of me?
Some came back in ghostly form
Searching for those I had taken from them
I will not release them
For I do not wish to be alone.

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Kelly Deschler November 26, 2014 at 2:03 AM I found this poem to be very interesting, Richard. Not only the haunting subject matter, but the unique perspective that it was written from. You've brought life to an inanimate object and given it emotional depth... This was an excellent write about the fateful Titanic and the aftermath... Adding it to my favorites! Richard Lamoureux November 26, 2014 at 7:02 AM Thanks for finding it Kelly.

Timothy Hicks October 17, 2014 at 12:49 AM Quite ghostly. You exude such empathy for those skeletal grins. I can't help but wonder the history behind it all... how did they die and what was the their life like before it all came down. Great sense of mystery in this one. Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2014 at 8:48 AM Yes, there are many mysteries on the bottom of the ocean. Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2014 at 8:47 AM

Cecilia Macfarlane October 13, 2014 at 8:50 PM Excellent write Rick, you captured these ghostly souls wonderfully...and they said she was unsinkable, never underestimate to power of an ice burg. I been well thanks, just busy, how are you? Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2014 at 8:47 AM Hi Cecillia, sorry I somehow missed your visit. Thanks for dropping by and to answer your question, I have been so busy of late but well.

Sharon Gulley October 3, 2014 at 8:59 PM So hauntingly beautiful Richard, Wow what a wonder piece. I have always loved the sea and a good ghost story, together though, brilliant...Sharon G. The Titantic, am I right? Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2014 at 8:49 AM You are indeed correct Sharon. Sorry for the late response.

Lionel Ledbetter September 29, 2014 at 10:38 PM Oh, And: "The Fable of the Fox and Goose, by me.

Lionel Ledbetter September 29, 2014 at 10:36 PM If you liked this poem; as I did, read: "Venus and the Soldier Ant", by Jenifer.

Arthur Vaso September 27, 2014 at 12:03 AM You have outdone even yourself, this is an A7, great write, I am however curious as to what event your are describing, I will go out on a limb and take a guess! Empress of Ireland ! Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2014 at 7:53 AM Nope it is the Titanic. The frozen grin and the band playing are the clues. Tell me about the empress of Ireland.

Lionel Ledbetter September 26, 2014 at 10:08 PM Very good. Is he the Titanic, or just any ship? Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2014 at 7:54 AM She is the Titanic.

Debbie Guzzi September 26, 2014 at 7:16 PM Alone is an insidious concept, a false concept people are never alone unless they chose to be BIG HUGS! Light & love Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2014 at 3:20 PM Hi Debbie, this was the one I was referring to.

Sara Kendrick September 26, 2014 at 2:21 PM The watery grave is a sad one..Enjoyed reading your work..If for a contest, it should do well..Thanks for the visit by my page..Sara

Casarah Nance September 26, 2014 at 1:37 PM Ooh This is a story frozen in time, and will never be washed away, the music still plays from the haunts under the waters. Enjoyed your write Richard, alwaysxx

Liam Mcdaid September 26, 2014 at 1:33 PM almost like a song richard vey beautifully penned piece

Honestly J.T. September 26, 2014 at 1:20 PM The Titanic. I like this poem (7)

Monterey Sirak September 26, 2014 at 8:52 AM I love it when you write like this! The feelings you evoke are universal, yet still singular and personal. Being lost at sea will bring different memories for different people. I actually thought of an old movie, The Poseidon Adventure, about a cruise ship that capsizes in a storm. It was kind of cheesy, but the theme song was amazing, about finding your way through the darkness, to the morning after, beyond the storm. I chose that song for my wedding song. Monterey Sirak September 26, 2014 at 3:02 PM The song is The Morning After by Maureen McGovern. Richard Lamoureux September 26, 2014 at 9:11 AM I remember that movie well, I'll have to look up the song.

Jerry T Curtis September 26, 2014 at 8:32 AM Excellent Richard You had me thinking of many ships of similar fate. And my all time favorite song "The Reck Of the Edmund Fitzgerald" by Gordon Lightfoot, a Canadian, I believe Richard Lamoureux September 26, 2014 at 8:33 AM Yes, he is a national treasure. Thanks Jerry!

Connie Marcum Wong September 25, 2014 at 8:15 PM What an exciting piece Richard. I too thought of the Titanic when reading this. Superb last lines too! Richard Lamoureux September 26, 2014 at 7:46 AM Good morning and thanks Connie.

Ralph Sergi September 25, 2014 at 7:43 PM Hi Richard: A beautiful tribute to all the great ships lost at sea. Your imagery of the ghosts wandering the halls is awesome.I will capsule that poem in my memory when I visit my daughter in Toronto in October. Arthur Vaso September 26, 2014 at 11:58 PM Please forgive Richards Blasphemy!!!!! The rest of us Canadians know thats not true!!!!! ( only kidding! ) Richard Lamoureux September 26, 2014 at 7:48 AM Toronto is a great city, I hope you enjoy your stay Ralph.

Jan Allison September 25, 2014 at 4:12 PM incredible imagery from the Titanic Richard - 2 years ago we went to the Titanic Museum in Dublin - a fascinating yet haunting place to visit. A 7 from me:-) hugs jan xxx Richard Lamoureux September 25, 2014 at 6:38 PM Hi Jan, I am honored. Thanks and a big hug back to you.

Charmaine Chircop September 25, 2014 at 3:40 PM Ow the dark power of the sea.This reminds me of the titanic,but also of the costa concordia and other tragic happenings.It does reach my soul in a deep way Richard.Am favoring this gem. Richard Lamoureux September 25, 2014 at 6:39 PM I am pleased you connected with this piece.

Brenda Meier-Hans September 25, 2014 at 2:42 PM What an amazing masterpiece Richard. I don't know why this ship seems to mystify us so much, but we never stop loving to hear anything that speaks of her. Richard Lamoureux September 25, 2014 at 6:44 PM The ship was so far ahead of anything that had been built and the builder said that not even God could sink it. That proved to be inaccurate. Still the ship lives on in our imaginations.

Paul Callus September 25, 2014 at 1:11 PM ...and another top 7 rating from me Richard! First time I heard the Titanic's thoughts echoing from the depths of the ocean floor. At least some of those on board survived, but the ship itself never stood a chance. Perhaps it should be left to rest in peace. // paul Richard Lamoureux September 25, 2014 at 6:46 PM Perhaps but it is human nature to seek for answers. Thanks for this great comment Paul.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 25, 2014 at 11:14 AM As if sunk titanic , pic cud be seen alive as I too sit deep down there to watch! Amazing write Richard for top 7 beyond any doubts my friend! Richard Lamoureux September 25, 2014 at 11:29 AM Wow, thanks Upma!

Liam Mcdaid September 25, 2014 at 11:09 AM really like this pen richard i tip my hat pal Richard Lamoureux September 25, 2014 at 11:30 AM I bow in thanks Liam.

Eileen Manassian September 25, 2014 at 10:33 AM WOW! This is so deep, Richard....So very deep...(at the bottom of the sea deep!) ;) Yes...the story of the Titanic moves me. I've written on it too...in a different light. Please add an S to promise. Thanks for visiting me. Hugs Eileen Manassian September 25, 2014 at 10:39 AM You do the same for me, my friend. Richard Lamoureux September 25, 2014 at 10:37 AM You must have read it while I was correcting it. Thanks for looking out for me.