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Crawling across the floors Trapped behind closed doors Never wanting anymore but to stay age 4 Do you remember childhood Rolling through the grass Excited for your class Waiting for the time to pass Do you remember the days Pedaling on your bike The girl that you still like You get Sad when the bell strikes Do you remember the time Driving down the road Those looks you made with code Your love that always showed Do you remember the pain When it broke your heart And it was just the start This is the beginning of art Do you remember childhood When childhood was still there And your heart wasn't bare And people would actually care Do you remember the fun That we always had is made us very glad but now it makes me mad There is no turning back when you hit that certain age you fell emotion in your body and you let it out with rage my childhood was innocent when the world seemed to be fair when my universe was around my toys and i didnt even care my childhood was the time when 9 lives lived in my dreams i began to grow up i had to use support beams my childhood was the time when my life was filled with bother when sorrows knocked at my door I gave everything to the almighty father my childhood was the time when love was pure when there were no obligations there may never be a cure my childhood was the time which is long ago tears flow from my eyes when i go back in my home my childhood will never come back but the child in me will never go Live you life to the fullest and make it as pure as gold

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Date: 6/17/2013 1:36:00 PM
Hi Daniel. - A very well written poem - thanks for your first poem, I hope there will be more in the future. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/14/2013 11:08:00 PM
a very good poem Daniel. Stopping by with a sweet smile and a warm Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless.......... Hugs* "SKAT"
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Daniel Eyler
Date: 6/16/2013 6:27:00 PM
Thanks you so much I just finished a new poem if you want to check it out I would be pleased.
Date: 6/14/2013 10:54:00 PM
You have some very good thoughts Daniel. I suggest some proof reading and a little attention to the structure of the poem. In this one it looks like your passion of the subject took you a little off track toward the end. . My advice is to perfect it on paper before you put it on line. If it doesn't sound right to you then it won't sound right to us. Also spell check because I feel like I stumble when I read a word that isn't spelled right. However, I enjoyed this read a great deal. Rockman
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Daniel Eyler
Date: 6/16/2013 6:27:00 PM
Thanks you so much I just finished a new poem if you want to check it out I would be pleased.
Date: 6/14/2013 9:53:00 PM
Daniel. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda
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Daniel Eyler
Date: 6/16/2013 6:27:00 PM
Thanks you so much I just finished a new poem if you want to check it out I would be pleased.

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