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Do You Remember

Do you remember...as I do our first kiss with firm unexpected flutters where tongues battled without fear the rush of days in dank rooms that gave freedom to our desires as lovers with sighing whispers burning like crimson flames of hunger perchance giving notice to starved emotions from life's dreary circumstance of unfulfilled dreams of needing to be properly loved two lonely hearts trapped in amber passionate illusions dressed up by romantic music and wafting scented smoke from melting candles dreaming of what could have been though for an endless hour of unrestrained passions from love's folly which covered three Winters seen through the open eyes of make-believe having met through happenstance could that it have been another time, another place under different moons as each kiss was a storm of unrelenting thunder exhausted from a daub of need where energy was drained leaving our flesh shaken and trembling I can't help but wonder...does each picture we painted still, hang in your secret gallery of yesterdays as yours does mine looked upon as a reminder of the awesome power of love, we felt once 1/18/19 contest Eight word challenge...Bardenesque Poetry

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Date: 2/23/2019 10:49:00 PM
Frederic, wonderful details to go along with the required words, lovely romance.
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Date: 2/21/2019 5:51:00 PM
Wonderful write Frederic, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 1/21/2019 2:12:00 PM
Frederic, I must say this is Parkeresque - you romantic you - very much enjoyed!
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Date: 1/19/2019 12:06:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Frederic! I like the line...hang in your secret gallery of yesterdays. Well done! :)
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Date: 1/19/2019 8:09:00 AM
Great poetry my friend..
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