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Do You Really Love Me??

When i woke up this morning I thought of you I hope that when you wake up, you'll think of me to I thought of your smile I thought of your kiss I dont think I want to keep doing this Everyone wants you Especally me My heart keeps telling me that I should be free Free from this drama Free from your lies All you get out of relationships are probably just cries But I want to be differant I want to stay true I want to tell people how much I love you But I cant at the moment Something has to be done I hope you pick the very right one So I leave you with this question One i just have to poke Do you truley love me or is this just a joke?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2010 1:23:00 AM
well written!
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Date: 11/8/2010 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning write in Frank's Love Story Contest Christianna. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:53:00 AM
Congrats Christianna on your HM in the Love Story Contest with this wonderful write and super win today ... enjoy a special honor all your own with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Christianna
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:06:00 AM
Such a deep write on love..congrats on HM in contest...Michael
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:00:00 AM
excellent peace my friend thank you duncan
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Date: 10/28/2010 7:33:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Christianna. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 8:15:00 AM
Passionate and sensuous write penned so well, Christianna
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Date: 10/27/2010 2:08:00 AM
The age old question....do you love me....of course this soul loves you....all souls love...the true question is though.....do you love ME ? *smiles* welcome...enjoy the ride ! much love, james
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Date: 10/26/2010 7:29:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest page offered to all new members .. good luck with luv..
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