Do You

R oses and rainbows

E veryday being better then the last

M aking love like there was no tomorrow

E njoying the world you live in

M aking plans for your first born

B ehaving like a child once again

E ngaging in talk of yesterdays

R eally living for the day







I wrote this poem in 2007 and am posting it for

you all to read. Do you REMEMBER these things?
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June 14, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Very good! It's worthy of a higher grade than 7, but it seems 7 us the highest score, possible, in Poetry Soup.
Makama Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:48 PM
This is so beautiful and wittingly written.
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December 20, 2015 at 7:12 PM
Carol, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Kovrlija Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 1:46 AM
Yes, I remember these things. That was the most beautiful period of my life!
Johnson Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 8:41 PM
I remember what never came. The dreams of change, but things remained the same. Somehow the ball got dropped, years went by and the bubble popped. Too many black cat's or walking under ladders. You get wore down and it feel's like nothing matters. But, I digress, :):):).
Timperley Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 1:30 PM
Hi Carol, yes I remember my past warts and all. I love to reminisce even though it makes me sad sometimes. Love your write. God Bless. D.
George   Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 3:04 AM
So nice to have you back, Carol. I have missed you. I...however, come and go frequently as you probably know. Love this Arcostic...and Yes! I do remember. Your old friend, Elaine
Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 12:49 AM
Hello Carol, How are you? not much seen on PS. I do remember the old days on PS
Gregory Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 7:54 PM
there is a nostalgic feeling that you create here... very good, I enjoyed reading it no end.....sweet
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 6:17 PM
Yes I remember them and i really enjoyed reminiscing about them in this lovely acrostic, Jan x
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