Do You

Do you take this strife No not without a wife Do you take this wife No not if she gives me strife Do you take this life Only with my own wife To give to me all the strife To maybe live a better life But first of all I need a wife DAMO x

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Damian Keady

Date: 10/19/2019 1:49:00 PM

Greetings to you as well my friend... I have never heard that quote before but it's now one of my favourites as well... thanks for sharing! It's night time here in the UK so I am just chilling as have been working and just got home.. but have a great day yourself.. best wishes as always DAMO :-)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/19/2019 1:38:00 PM

Greetings DAMO! You are not alone. We all have a lot to learn! Here's one of my FAV quotes.. " I'd rather be green and growing, rather than ripe and rotten" Have a Frabjous day Panagiota

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/16/2019 11:15:00 PM

Damien, I like this interesting life. Good tidings, at a price, for happiness known. For me I'll keep my wife, sh's rent-to-own. -Richard

Damian Keady
Date: 10/17/2019 5:30:00 PM

Thanks Richard for your comment.. this was just a play on words.. I have lots to learn.. both in life and in writing poetry... best DAMO