Do They Ask Too Much

So easily pleased,
All they ask is a little space,
To kick or throw a ball.

Is that too much to ask 
When we grant space for liquor stores by the score,
And places to gamble money that should pay for the ball.

Is it right that adults get a  choice of golf courses
Even in the city. 
And malls get first call on our green spaces
Yet we don't seem to object when they get to share the street
with the cars.

Even when space is saved to kick or throw the ball,
They find that they are too small,
And don't get called onto the pitch.

It used to be that a playground could be used to kick the ball at a pinch.
Now sadly the space is filled with monstrosities of every shape and size,
That preclude the use of a ball,
All to make a profit for people who have a product to sell.

Have they not suffered enough at daycare
Where space to kick the ball is mostly a dream.
And when they get home with no back yard to call their own
How can we say we pander to their needs

Do they ask too much for a little space to kick or throw the ball,
Or should we just accept that down the track they will be not fit enough
To enjoy any space we care to provide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/23/2016 2:23:00 PM
Well Done David, a great lament and well constructed. Enjoyed the read, you are quite right to ask! Regards, Craig
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
David Smith
Date: 10/23/2016 11:31:00 PM
Thanks Craig. There used to be green corridors where children could run til all puffed out even in cities. A lot of our playgrounds are getting so filled up with too much equipment and at exorbitant cost to point there is not space for running or kicking ball. Children with space to burn off energy are better behaved and that is a fact. Best regards David
Date: 10/23/2016 7:43:00 AM
Its not too much to ask. Well penned.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
David Smith
Date: 10/23/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thanks Phil for taking time to read and for comments. Best wishes from David in NZ
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter