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Do Not Knock

At the door of my heart I hear a knock It is late and all are in slumber deep And the door jammed like a rock Fruitless to wake up emotions asleep Once a jasmine faced entered this door For decades knocking sound’s unheard Why to entreat, why to conjure With wings clipped, I’m a caged bird She has left behind love’s fragrance Her images are flowering in my eyes Every recess reflecting her radiance My life her vivid memories glamorize She left and yet occupies her dwelling In a sunny day and in moonlit night Her memories come and go without telling Brilliant like vision, sparkling like light. My deserted heart needs no recompense To revive its liveliness and effervescence This door can never ever be ajar Do not knock whoever you are!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/4/2012 9:28:00 AM
Soundslike a dream that shouldn't end. Lovely intruderto share you night with!
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Mohammad Yamin
Date: 7/7/2012 4:52:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem and for your appreciation
Date: 1/2/2010 1:59:00 PM
Brilliantly constructed and conveyed. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 1/1/2010 6:11:00 PM
Sad and yet beautifully written! Congratulations on your poeem being featured this weeek, Mohammed! Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2010 5:52:00 PM
Mohammed~ What a passionate flair you have for writing so well done! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 12/31/2009 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Mohammad. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:23:00 PM
Dear Mohammad, Congratulations on getting through the First Round of the PoetrySoup October contest Wishing YOU the best of Luck ALWAYS…HG
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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Date: 12/23/2009 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Mahammad. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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Date: 12/22/2009 7:37:00 PM
Another honor for this poem. Congratulations on making it to the finals! Good luck in the next round. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:14:00 PM
Dear Mohammad, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 10:01:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:09:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/11/2009 11:39:00 PM
this is a really beautiful and evocative write! thank you.
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Date: 12/11/2009 3:19:00 PM
Dear Mohammad, Congratulations on YOUR POEM " Do not Knock " being a well deserved Feature this week I am a rhymist at Heart and this magnificent POEM is beautifully Rhymed I bow to YOUR Talent ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:26:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on getting featured this week! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:44:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/8/2009 5:43:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a thought provoking poem. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mohammad. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:20:00 PM
BRILLIANT WRITING ,Mohammad. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:09:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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Date: 11/30/2009 4:39:00 PM
I especially like the next to the last stanza. What a testimony to the influence of one person's life on another whether they left through death or other reasons. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 6/29/2009 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful write! -jeremiah
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