Do Not Delay Your Hug

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Morning aloneness. Dawn imparts prized magic. Next, the star blinks and vanishes. The Moon and Sun share the same sky. Autumn trees reveal their souls. was interred under a leafy canopy. Hazy memories of the past persist. Striking was impossible, yet I bore it. within a person’s heart. The mind reflects a rocky promontory. where spaces collided within the body, Pulling their last breath, they expired They acquire permission to fly. The body, mind, and soul are all bound. a while ago I grasped this. The world has got its last odds of fading. Pedestals are left above the hazes. A cold bite encounters snow and frost. Yet, I am jumping out of this plane. for I, who soared to towering heights Will I deliver you back to Earth? Kisses melt snow and frost. Lever your heart for love and empathy.
Written: November 19, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 11/20/2022 7:41:00 PM
So beautifully written ! Your brain simmers with ideas and in beautiful verse they are transformed and reach us to be read and enjoyed! Great penning dear Lasaad !
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Date: 11/20/2022 3:14:00 PM
Very nicely written. A hug makes such a difference. :)
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Date: 11/20/2022 9:55:00 AM
What don't we do for a hug, my dearest friend, Lasaad, especially when the atmosphere is so idyllic! Wonderfully written! Blessings!
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Date: 11/20/2022 5:29:00 AM
I like the message your title conveys my friend. Great imagery throughout.
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Date: 11/19/2022 6:49:00 PM
Wow! ‘lever your heart for love and empathy’
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