Do Not Allow a Volatile Relationship Ruin Your Life (Abuse)

Do not allow a volatile relationship ruin your life

Written By Dean Masciarelli

October 24, 2010 (4:33pm)




Do not allow a volatile relationship ruin your life

Get out while you can; and listen to what I am saying 

Before it causes you to go through  way to much strife;

And a whole hell of a lot of heart break and pain;

Just by living with someone who has an evil twin;

And even though that part of them; only comes out every now and then;

It’s far better for you to walk away right now; while you still can;

And I know that it is a difficult lesson; to have to learn on your own;

But if you do not listen to me right now; some where down 
the line;
you could be the one; who could  end up losing your life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/24/2010 5:28:00 PM
Very deep and intense. .tmfs!C
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Date: 10/24/2010 4:34:00 PM
another beautifully penned piece with an important message,
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Date: 10/24/2010 4:31:00 PM
Smile ~ We could sort throughout histories pages to find countless souls whom gave their lives if it were need be, "In The Name of 'Love;' Exchanging This Moment In Time for, 'An Eternity In Paradise' Wherein, 'Love, Shall Never Die!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You & Yours," John! ~ Smile, "Great Caring Poe &, Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'My Friend;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 10/24/2010 4:22:00 PM
Smile ~ "Hello, 'Dear Gifted & Priceless, Dean Masciarelli!'" ~ I have viewed a few of "Your" poes throughout time &, "You" are a very talented & compassionate writer my friend! ~ As for this profoundly presented poe here well, some people are born for a very purpose & reason in life & time; just as was "Christ the Messiah" &, they know the possible stakes involved; volatile or not; they are compelled by "Love &, 'By The Hand of God!!!'" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:42:00 PM
Nice uplifting thoughts on the alerts of a volatile relationship, Dean
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