Do I Love Him

(24/08/2-2012)

Who would’ve thought I’d be his? I used to hate him.
What was expected seems never fit the wish
When my mind was for other, fate directed my heart to him
Where is my hatred hiding? Or has it melted then vaporized?
Why now I can’t put a smile without his? Can’t bear my life without him? I guess I do love him


Written for Harry Horsman's '5 W's Contest'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 10/24/2012 4:05:00 PM
Dinda, where is a new poem from you?? Let me see if I can find one I have not read. If not, thanks so much for your two sweet comments to me recently!
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Date: 10/24/2012 9:15:00 AM
dinda, missed ya!... got more??.. ) huggs!
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Date: 10/15/2012 8:06:00 AM
how about some new poems from you? :)
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Date: 10/11/2012 8:11:00 PM
A great entry for the contest Dinda; love doescreate its own confusion as I read in your lines. Love Lizzie
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Date: 9/14/2012 2:13:00 AM
You DO love him!!Enjoyed the poem very much Dinda.
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Date: 9/5/2012 10:22:00 AM
isn't it funny how you don't like someone at first and then before you know it, they've taken you over? love is crazy :)
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Date: 8/31/2012 5:30:00 PM
Wonderful way to work the W's; a worthy way to whack a win! Love, Silly Lizzie
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Date: 8/26/2012 11:11:00 AM
This was a very sweet way you did the W's contest, Dinda. I enjoyed reading your love poem!
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Date: 8/26/2012 10:04:00 AM
Love is a many splendored thing. Be careful not to give you heart away so easily! Nice romantic work! Peace & love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:08:00 AM
...and now....you love him.... well written for the contest Dinda. - Wish you luck, hope for a win for YOU ! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2012 2:27:00 PM
love this sweet write - a winner for sure
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